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I liked how you brang the young woman down to a " normall" girl with dancing because she likes to be admired. it so fits with the mior arcana.

This was a fun exersise in general i hope to take heed of the advise you have been giving or ateleast some of it there seem to be a treasure trove of gold nuggets in there of wisdom.
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