Oh yes, I see it now - at least, I see a woman holding something white, which could well be a moon.
It looks as if she's also holding a sun, is that right?
Still, I miss some (calm) water..... but perhaps that's just me.
I don't know, there's something a little bit too simple about this particular card for me, like it needs something more.
Not that a High Priestess shouldn't be simple and 'clean' in some ways, but in this one I feel as if I'm missing some symbolism.
But maybe that's because I keep comparing it to that splendid, rich Moon card.
I'm glad you're putting a means of escape in the 8 of Swords, because I always saw that card as 'you could get out if you only did something'. (all the swords surrounding the RWS figure could easily cut her ropes, although it might be a little dangerous)
Edited to add: I think I've figured out what I feel is wrong on the HP: it's too bright, too much daylight. I've always seen that card as taking place at night, or at least in deep shade.