Mallah
First off I have to say that I’m a HUGE fan of the God Tarot and find the book and take on the cards to be hugely unique in the landscape of tarot. I want to start off saying that I by no means consider myself an artist and have huge respect for those that are and so no offense is meant. Also if any of what I question is an artistic choice just ignore my ramblings.
This deck has not quite grabbed be yet. I like the idea, as I do stained glass as a hobby, and I have several decks that are done in that style.
The use of the lead line look is a bit uneven. It looks like, especially on cards such as The Fool and Empress, that the lines are an after thought. When taking a class we were taught to do all we can to use the lead lines as part of the image. They should flow with the art not against it. When planning out a piece to make it was how to use as few pieces of glass as possible to get the effect. The Empress, to me, came across as if the image was done then the lines were put in when it was done. I almost feel that the “leading” should flow up and down with the trunk of the tree rather then break it apart. But in the Magician, Emperor and Lovers they go amazing with the image.
May I ask what medium you are using to make the images? When I think of stained glass the colors are rich and saturated. The Magician is wonderful in both the line work and use of color. It LOOKS like a glass window, but several of the other cards look rather pale in the use of color. In glass making whenever you change color then you need to change glass. Unless it is a patterned glass or detail work is done as a relief in the glass to really be seen when light is shining through it. If these were richer in tone I bet they would look great as a transparent deck.
Just small details that, again my be artistic choices, I see that throw me off. The detailing on the harp is outstanding, but it draws me to the hands of the Empress which almost look like claws. Some of the facial features look a bit..well..off center. Everyone has their own artistic style so this may be just rambling now.
I like the concepts of the cards and think there is something to be had there, and I do watch the thread.
THANK YOU for your input...as I was telling Gregory, I think the Empress is going to be re done, and i have the same feeling about it....as a matter of fact, you are correct...the lines were added later, as an experiment, to keep me from having to re do the image. Part of what happened when i started the deck last spring was that i got away rather quickly from the desire to do it as a "stained glass" tarot...and yet I liked the idea that I had with the empress so much I thought i'd try it to see if I could pull it off. It only worked in some parts of the image. The Storyteller/Hierophant is even worse. I like the concept I've come up with (Storyteller instead of Bishop/Pope) but this image, too, was "adapted" to the SG look. The fire part of the picture worked well. And i like the idea of trees in the back being the lead lines... but how to do the "darkness" back there and still have it come out that there is light coming thru the glass is a challenge. Ultimately both the Hierophant and the Empress will be re-done...I put them out to illustrate the symbolism I want to use...
ANd the Fool....I think he's going to have to be re done as well...just to bring him up to spec...I've gotten so much better at doing the glassy look since I did him...but the image will probalby remain the same...probably use the same line drawing and just color him again.
As for media, I'm using colored pencil. And sharpies. I know I could probably get a better look with some other media, but the time it will take to master new media (not being an "artist") not to mention the space (I have a 16x24 inch square of desk to work on...and no money to invest in paints brushes, etc etc....). I've used Prismas for years, and did my first deck with them. I'm getting pretty advanced in my blending and underlayment techniques.... Maybe one day I'll branch into other media, but i'll have to have a lot more space available to me than I currently have!
Again thanks for the input. I'll look specifically at what you said about the direction of the lead lines and frequency of them...and i think what you said about the glass..."when you change the color you need to change glass"...I think that means that glasses of different colors would have different textures? I'll consider that as well as I proceed.
What do you think about the lead lines in my "hermit?" there are some that cross over him...contrary to direction...but i sort of like how they show "vortexes" swirling around him a bit.